3 More for C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by CrissAwad, Jun 21, 2010.

  1. CrissAwad

    CrissAwad TPF Noob!

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    Ok, this is my third attempt, 2 other were kind of fail.
    Tried some long exposure too.

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    The pics aren't in a good quality because they were taken from facebook.

    C&C welcome. :)
     
  2. er111a

    er111a TPF Noob!

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    facebook? why? and that is 4
     
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    For the first and second, you need a higher or lower angle, not car-height-level. IMO, at least, it just looks awkward and you can get a lot more lines higher/lower. The second one kind of demonstrates what I mean, how it's more interesting, but something odd is going on with those lights in the back. Filters/humidity? on the lens could have contributed to this.

    As for the third, get closer to the fountain... you can barely tell it's long exposure :( And again, the light thing. ?
    The fourth is exposed oddly...
     
  4. CrissAwad

    CrissAwad TPF Noob!

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    I still didn't open an account in any hosting site. I will after i get my D90 next week or so. Flickr proabably.

    Thanks for the comment.
    The last pic was slightly edited, here's the original:
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    Is it better?

    Thanks.
     
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    It's not exposed oddly now, but it's still a little dark for a beach picture.
     

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