3 recent pics for C&C

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  1. score04w

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    Couple of pics that I've taken that I would like some feedback for.

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  2. er111a

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    here made a edit hope you dont mind
     

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    ^^ Sorry, I prefer the original.

    Feedback as requested:

    1) Nice scene. A lot of the sky is blown out (and er111a's edit made that worse which is why I prefer this one). I'm thinking a polarizing filter may help?
    2) The red draws my attention to the chair, which isn't particularly interesting in itself. Table cloth looks over exposed. Perhaps a little more space and an off-centre position for the table would have been more pleasing?
    3) The light from the windows is causing you problems, and more light is needed on the subject (the flowers). A piece of white card would have helped.

    I think #1 is the best of the set.
     
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    I like 1 the most but I wish the sky wasn't as blown out. Hey er11a what effect is that on your edit?
     
  5. score04w

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    Thank you for the edit and feedback. I was having problems with the first one. It was a very hot day and the sky was already hazy and almost blown out. I can't remember if i used a cp or not. It also drives me a little crazy because i hadn't noticed the tag of her shirt til i got home.
     
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    Shirt tag is fairly easy fix.
     
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    watch the horizons.

    #1 is a very nice shot.
     
  8. er111a

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    sexy soft and Diabolical
     
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    lol diabolical

    you got a dictionary over there er11a?
    im not getting diabolical from these.
    please expand upon your thoughts. im curious.
     
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    thats what the action is called
     
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  12. score04w

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    did a mild hdr style edit on the flowers.

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