3 wise men

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Andrea K, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. Andrea K

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    Let me know what you think!

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    thanks for looking! :D
     
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    Love the concept and the idea behind it, however, I feel it lacks something. I think it is vibrant colors and maybe some contrast. That is just how I feel. I am just a noob, however, so I may be way off. Love the spiritual side (in the foreground and in focus) and the commercial side (in the background out of focus). Thats what I took from it. Good work.
     
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    The idea seems to me genial.The representative figures of Christmas, and to the bottom the tree with the details so characteristic of this time of the year. Perhaps, you must have supported the scene with something but of light between the figures and the tree, so that everything was but noticeable... arbol would have but light, and the figures they quedarian but noticeable. Excuses by my English. Greetings from Spain.

    La idea me parece genial.Las figuras representativas de la navidad, y al fondo el árbol con los detalles tan característicos de esta época del año. Tal vez, tendrías que haber apoyado la escena con algo mas de luz entre las figuras y el árbol, para que todo quedara mas marcado...el arbol tendría mas luz, y las figuras quedarian mas marcadas. Disculpas por mi English. Saludos desde España.
     
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    Lovely idea Andrea, good bokeh too. Very low-key image, could it possibly do with a little tweak to make the men stand out a bit more?

    Rob
     
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    thanks for the comments everyone. I tried to boost the contrast to get the men to stand out more but that didn't work very well because the tree started to go odd colors.
     
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    I agree with the others, great idea and composition but it could use more contrast between the silhouettes and the background.
     
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    Nice one!!
     

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