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  1. TylerF

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    took a walk/drive with a friend and got a few. c&c welcome

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    mom wanted shots to hang in the town hall. this might be one.
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    deff goin back when the weather clears up or gets sunny
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    I like the last one a lot as a B&W, nice mood

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    Why thank you
     
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    Any others?
     
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    I liked the last one. Maybe clone out the wire in the background
     
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    I think the last one is the only one really worth a mention.
    The focus seems a little bit off in #3.
    Number 1 is a bit boring, the expression is bland, and the guy looks like hes thinking "oh my goodness, do you have to take another photo of me. Take me home and make me some soup"
    #2 looks like a community center or something, that is just a plain building. The composition of the shot also throws me a little bit. Not really sure what to look at.

    Anyway number 4 is great, really like it!
     
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    Didn't even notice it haha. Thank you.
     
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    The "portrait" of my friend was just me messing around I guess. The second one is more for my mom. She is the town clerk here and wants photos for the town hall. It pretty much is a community center haha. And there were ugly signs everywhere so the composition was limited. I might go back and retry some more. But I took almost every angle I could.

    Thanks though
     
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    I find 2 to be kind of boring. It is dead center in the frame and doesn't really do much for me. It just seems like a shot of a building but no real feeling or emotion with it.

    In 3 it just seems like the main subject easily gets lost with the background. Actually took me a second to find the subject when I first saw it. It's hard to get something like that to "pop" when the background looks just like it.

    4 is my favorite out of the bunch. B&W works good with this and gives off a certain mood. With the old building and everything around it dead. Nice job.

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    Yeah, I don't really know how to make the building look not boring haha. Its a boring building I hate winter so much haha. 3 isn't my style. Just thought I would post it. But 1 out of 4, can't complain :)
     
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    1 of 4 is good. I took about 400 photos over the weekend and kept and liked about 50ish. I can't exactly remember.
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