4 new photos. C & C please...

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  1. CrissAwad

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    Hello,

    Took some photos from my buddy's new apartment...
    2 night shots, 1 noon shot and 1 macro attempt.

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    All of them were taken in manual mode...
    Thanks in advance.
     
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    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    these shots arent that interesting, personally. The macro is way underexposed, and is just.. not working.
     
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    D-B-J, thanks for teh comment.
    I'm more interested in the photography itself. I know it's quite boring but i'm very limited right now. Anything i can do to make the picture better.
    As for the Macro, i'll add another one in this post.
    Thank you very much for the criticism :)

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    I like the night shots but I think they would look better cropped to show two thirds sky and one third foreground. There is some negative space on the bottom and the sky is more interesting.
     
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    The pictures don't really WOW me.
     
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    For those night shots, try a longer shutter speed. Would have blurred the cars nicely and made the clouds more interesting. Plus it looks too dark, as do all these pictures actually...
     
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    I agree. The 3rd one might have had some potential, but it, too , is missing the "wow"factor.
     
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    Appreciating all the comment guys...
    Fail no.2 :)
    Next time will be better hopefully once i get my DSLR in 2 weeks ;)
     
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    Ya, the city night shots have potential, but I would have stopped down the lens a little and decreased the shutter speed to get better trails on the cars and better exposure overall on the photo.
     

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