4 new photos. C & C please...

CrissAwad

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Hello,

Took some photos from my buddy's new apartment...
2 night shots, 1 noon shot and 1 macro attempt.

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All of them were taken in manual mode...
Thanks in advance.
 
these shots arent that interesting, personally. The macro is way underexposed, and is just.. not working.
 
D-B-J, thanks for teh comment.
I'm more interested in the photography itself. I know it's quite boring but i'm very limited right now. Anything i can do to make the picture better.
As for the Macro, i'll add another one in this post.
Thank you very much for the criticism :)

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I like the night shots but I think they would look better cropped to show two thirds sky and one third foreground. There is some negative space on the bottom and the sky is more interesting.
 
For those night shots, try a longer shutter speed. Would have blurred the cars nicely and made the clouds more interesting. Plus it looks too dark, as do all these pictures actually...
 
Appreciating all the comment guys...
Fail no.2 :)
Next time will be better hopefully once i get my DSLR in 2 weeks ;)
 
Ya, the city night shots have potential, but I would have stopped down the lens a little and decreased the shutter speed to get better trails on the cars and better exposure overall on the photo.
 

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