4 Portraits

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  1. dbrandon

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    These I took a while ago, but have never posted here to get feedback.

    The first 2 I tried to go for a 'fashion-y' look, with the more dramatic lighting, and the second 2 were intended to be more formal and conventional I suppose.

    Anyway, comments and critique are welcomed and much appreciated.


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    #3
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  2. Jamesy

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    nice, i especially like #1 :thumbup:
     
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    #4 is my favourite... Cool shots.
     
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    I would like to see #3,4 on a different background and with a non-white shirt.
     
  5. dbrandon

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    Thank you Jamesy and noescape.

    You are quite right, the white tshirt and white background were not ideal. Lack of time and equipment didn't help either :(
     
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    2 seems to have such a harsh shadow on his face, and that bothers me..

    i would work with your lighting, just experiment.
     
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    That's what i plan to do :D Since taking those pictures i now have a reflector and a little more experience, so hopefully i'll have some better ones to post sometime in the future. :wink:
     

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