5 for C&C!

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  1. Mooshoo4

    Mooshoo4 TPF Noob!

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    just a few shots I took last week. C&C please!

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  2. ababysean

    ababysean TPF Noob!

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    i'm not really sure what I'm looking at but they are very nice!

    I'm a newbie too, so I can't give much advice.
     
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    Mooshoo, here are a few comments in general.


    1. Lighting
    These shots look like they were taken during a very sunny day. In general, very sunny days can be difficult, especially if you do not understand how the settings of your camera work.
    Each shot is either overexposed or has portions of it that are overexposed.
    If your limited in time to shoot, and have to shoot during the "highnoon" time, either shoot in the shade or learn more about your settings

    2. Focus
    It may be the screen, but the shots are not well focused.
    This and the overexposure makes it difficult to see your shots.

    3. Composition
    I can see what you are trying to do with your composition, and I like it. your subjects are good.
    So work on your technical/camera skills and your improvements will come quickly.
     
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    i second everything pbelarge said. keep trying though, your ideas are good.
     
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    I will add to what everyone has already said, and say that they are too Saturated or atleast seem to be to me.
     
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    Thanks everyone! Im working with a different camera then I usually would cause my camera was broken for a long while and just got it back and havent had the chance to use it much because my family has had it a lot but I am excited to work more with it since it is a nicer camera! :lol:
     

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