5 pics from event - looking for feedback

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  1. mrvgson

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    Here are 5 pics from a race yesterday. As usual, I took about 400 pics and narrowed it down to 20 pics that were decent for a race report :(. I further filtered it to 5 pics that I felt I could post here for feedback. Looking for your critique and suggestions. Please be brutal. Hopefully with lots of practice and feedback from this group I can improve my shots and percentage.

    Most were shot with the 70-300mm lens. D70. Some basic editing done in Elements.

    I noticed that there is a spot on the lowerleft corner of some of the pics (guess it may have been dirt on the lens). Sometime this month I plan to take my camera/lens for cleaning to a camera shop. (I have not done this since I bought the camera in 2006).

    1. mom&son
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    2. rich
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    3. mike
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    4. cool
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    5. brothers
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    Thanks in advance.
     
  2. Sirene

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    Love the 5th one
     
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    Nice...
    I like all of your pictures but I love 4 & 5. You can sell picture no. 3 as communication or mobile technology advertising :)
     
  4. mrvgson

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    Thanks everyone.

    bumping thread to get more feedback.
     
  5. mrvgson

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    I was hoping to get some tips on how I can improve? anyone?

    greatly appreciate your suggestions.
     
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    #3 and #5 are great photos. Excellent composition and good technique. Nothing special about the other three.
     
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    I really like 1,3, and 5. Number 2 look underexpose to me and background is kind of distracting with that stupid tree in th background even though it's blur.
     
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    You mention in your set up for the photos that these were from a race. I don't see anything in the photos that indicate this.
     
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    Thanks everyone. I appreciate all your comments.

    Yes, there were a lot of pictures of runners, but none of them stood out. That is why I posted the best of my lot for critique.
     

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