6 for C&C please

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  1. TylerF

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    went around to take shots for the town hall. they gave me a list of places and i began working on them today. i might go back and re-take all of them haha. they want to hang them in the front office when im done.

    dont know which one i like more of these 2.
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    I like the series.

    #1 - The branch on the top-right bothers me. I'd clone that out and for future shoots....be aware of the small details.

    #2 - I like the composition, I just wish there were some more clouds. There's too much blue sky for me.

    The last one, I like it but I'd like to see the bottom of the trunk. It looks like you cut off a person's feet!

    Hope this helps.
     
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    i know what you are saying with the tree. if i backed up at all, there was an ugly swingset lol. i can pp in some clouds. brb haha
     
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    what do you think? lol

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    Actually it looks good. :D
     
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    haha too fake? or should i just stick with the original?
     
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    I couldn't tell at this size. Me personally, I wouldn't add them though. I'd just wait until conditions were 'better'. You might even get a good shot at sun rise or sunset! ;)
     
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    True it's been hard for me to get the time to get out during the day. So the sun was out and I took it haha. I'm not sure when they want them by so I might hav time to go back and shoot again. I have a bunch of other places they want me to shoot lol
     
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    Sounds like a fun project! Are you getting paid?
     
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    I think they look good! I would clone out the wanted poster on the welcome sign. Just my opinion. Cute little town too, I love small town America.
     
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    haha thanks. i have lived here my whole life. kinda afraid to leave haha. im not too good with cloning. and its a posted sign lol not a wanted sign haha.

    i am not getting paid, my mom is the town clerk. so i am taking the pictures for practice, and a lot of the town residents will go in and see them. i am leaving a bunch of my contact cards at the office. hopefully good exposure. and some of them will be put into the towns historical records. so thats kinda neat. something i can tell people
     
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    I guess it does help to have 'connections'!! :thumbup:
     

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