8 more shots from my first portrait session with a local model...

THORHAMMER

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heres a few more.....

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#1 is a bit distracting the way you cut off her toes. #5, I'd like to see a little more contrast. #2 is my favorite, I think it could use a tiny bit more contrast, but other than that, I think it's wonderful. #3, the trash and such on the sand behind her is very distracting and I don't look immediately at her, I see that purple shovel or something that is down there first. Cleaning that up would make that one great.

The rest are pretty good.
 
2 and 8 are my favs. Fantastic light, nice expression and very crisp.
 

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