A nice conversion. I would suggest that it's slightly over-exposed, and a little rich in mid-tones (grey). Try dropping the brightness down a little, and play around with levels and curves to see if you can get a more full dynamic range.
I respectfully disagree. As an old BW shooter, the mid tones were what we shot for. In film we would maybe burn in an area to make it POP but here I think the overall tonal range is perfect and the composition is good. I would not change a thing and I think it is a wall hanger. Judt my humble opinion of course- but I think it is a classic.
Judge Sharpe