A concise photo C&C please

Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by bluewave930, Jul 15, 2007.

  1. bluewave930

    bluewave930 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2007
    Messages:
    31
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think this photo is quite concise~ I'd rather that I had focused on mildle one,but there ware some reasons prevent me from doing so~
    How do you think of this photo?
    [​IMG]
     
  2. Trenton Romulox

    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 10, 2007
    Messages:
    2,392
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Maine
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    The background is too white and I don't think having the closest 'wheat thing' out of focus works well based on its position (middle of frame).
     
  3. blackdoglab

    blackdoglab yeah I'm easy.... but I'm not cheap

    Joined:
    Jun 26, 2006
    Messages:
    1,057
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    in my darkroom
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    too much dead space and it's too darn bright. you need more wheat than that to make some bread
     
  4. bluewave930

    bluewave930 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2007
    Messages:
    31
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    thanks for your comments:lol:
     
  5. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2004
    Messages:
    5,346
    Likes Received:
    65
    Location:
    Santa Barbara, CA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I disagree with the other's comments. I think the elements of the photo, the exposure and subject, work quite nicely. I think what you need to do is come up with a better composition however. This could be really great, but the composition is not engaging with the strong elements being misplaced in the frame. Give me something to lead my eye into the photo. The other problem I see is that there appears to be a light pole out of focus in the background which disturbs the natural elements of the photo.
     
  6. shorty6049

    shorty6049 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2007
    Messages:
    1,906
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Minnesota
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    i like it, but it looks like vector art to me
     
  7. DRodgers

    DRodgers TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 11, 2007
    Messages:
    290
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Stoney Creek Ontario
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    huh!

    Vector graphics (also called geometric modeling or object-oriented graphics) is the use of geometrical primitives such as points, lines, curves, and polygons, which are all based upon mathematical equations to represent images in computer graphics. It is used in contrast to the term raster graphics, which is the representation of images as a collection of pixels.
     
  8. nomade

    nomade TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 17, 2007
    Messages:
    150
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Alexandria, Egypt
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I like the idea(i.e the lines), but the focus, light use, aren't helping it.
     
  9. bluewave930

    bluewave930 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2007
    Messages:
    31
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    great comments guys~thank you very much~I appreciate it~~
     
  10. shorty6049

    shorty6049 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2007
    Messages:
    1,906
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Minnesota
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    what? well, maybe not VECTOR per-say, but it looks computer animated is what i was trying to say ( i know its not, it just sorta has that look to it)
     
  11. jon_k

    jon_k TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2007
    Messages:
    213
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    North Richland Hills (Ft. Worth suburb) TX
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    What type of light source was this? Looks like it was taken a mile or two away from the sun!

    Has potential to be cool. Center should have been focused. If you had more wheat in the background it'd been better.
     
  12. skieur

    skieur TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 14, 2007
    Messages:
    5,076
    Likes Received:
    202
    Location:
    Canada
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    You were right the first time with the VECTOR art comment. I taught computer art, at one stage. However my eye is very much distracted by the extreme over-exposure which considerably reduces detail. I would have gone for side lighting and more accurate exposure.

    skieur
     

Share This Page