A couple boudir shots - C&C please - not really work safe

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by foreverflirty, Dec 21, 2008.

  1. foreverflirty

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    The first is untouched except for a couple minor things. The 2nd hasa little photoshop done to it. You took the time to view it, please C&C or add a comment.

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    #1 I love the colors and tattoos! The hands holding the boobs is awkward. Maybe just drape one arm over both next time. Also, I can't help but want to rotate this photo. For some reason I think the model is supposed to be standing.


    #2 the black shading is too dark...looks like she has a black eye, nose, and thigh. Also, I would clone out where your ribs stick out.
     
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    The expression is so important in these types of photos. The second one is better than the first. But But both are too safe. You need to give it more "edge."
     
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    Thats funny....you guy spicked out pretty much everything I had, lol.

    She was VERY timid. I kept telling her to relax the whole hands on the boobs. Makes em look squished, posed, and to tight. She looked real tight in all of them I took. Partyl because she is my wifes best friend and pretty much like a sister to me so it was a little akward for her. And me, lol.

    I agree on the second. I never noticed the black eye look until you said something. Good catch. I'm still working on trying to achieve that real dark b&w shot with lots of grain but still keeping detail.
     

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