A couple new shots, C&C Welcome

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  1. dak1b

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    Heres a few pics i jus took. tell me what u thinkj. C&C welcome!!! enjoy!:mrgreen:

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    #1 you cut off the top of the arch, and the frame is crooked. The arch could have been a very nice framing device for an effective centered shot.
     
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    good critque! thanks for the pointers. i'll have to train my eyes more in being more aware of the backgrounds.
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    No problem.
    You will find it's a decent hurdle to get over, but one fairly important one on your journey.

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