A couple of mine

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  1. Randyjbeck

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    I just signed up and thought I would see what you guys thought about a few of my photos.

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    I like your 2nd pic, cool looking shack.
     
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    1. Love it. You've got a lot of patterns and shapes going on here that all blend together nicely. I might suggest increasing the contrast a bit though.

    2. It needs a stronger point of interest. The crumbling ouse in a field just doesn't say enough in my opinion.
     
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    I like #1 - very interesting patterns and perspective. Is this from the Venetian in Vegas?
     
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    i like two. but then im a sucker for flat, painting like photos. i figure, just about anyone can take a picture of a long hallway and make it look sortof cool, but flat photos need a certain eye. i tried a square crop on that one and liked it a bit more too. taking out a bit of the bottom, and centering it more to the left of the house. neat shot
     

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