A couple of my best portraits

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  1. kieransimkin

    kieransimkin TPF Noob!

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    Both of these were taken indoors without flash on ISO1600 - the grain shows when you pixelpeek but they're still my favourite portraits. Critiques welcomed and appreciated.

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    Sarah

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    Caitlin​
     
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    Lighting on Sarah is pretty good, but the focus is really soft and the smile looks a little forced. It also looks like that she just woke up in the morning as well.

    The shot on Caitlin for me is quite ordinary. They're good as photos, but just normal photos in my opinion.
     
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    These are only nitpicks: Sarah has a hair that is hanging down and going through the center of her eye, it is very distracting. Caitlin's arm goes out of the frame and his hand comes back in, they should be connected if only a little bit. I like the pictures otherwise.
     

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