A Couple Recents For C&C

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  1. DennyCrane

    DennyCrane No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I haven't posted many pictures lately- feel free to offer questions, comments, and cheap shots.

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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    C&C per req:

    1. A nice capture; I think a tighter crop on the two blooms would have helped composition. Technically, a bit of tissue or something to diffuse (what I assume was) the on-camera flash would helped.

    2. This is a case where spot-metering would have helped greatly. A tighter crop to reduce some of the unnecessary background would have also strengthed the image. As-is, I think a bit of a crop and some levels/curves tweaks to brighten the bird would make it an even nicer image.

    3. I like this and I like the sepia tretment. Again a crop to avoid centering the subject and a levels/curves adjustment to reduce the highlights would make this a really nice capture.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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    2 and 3 are my favorites here... Very nice... I love the horse shot...
     
  4. DennyCrane

    DennyCrane No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thanks for the feedback. Here's the original horse picture. A little editing was done.

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    Nice editing. :bow:
     
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    hmm, it appears you may have forgotten to edit out some of the second horse along the arch of the neck.
     
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    I tried a couple times, couldn't manage it, and gave up. I figured unless someone knew an edit was afoot, they probably wouldn't notice. I also stole the tail off the back horse and gave it to the front one.
     
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    D'oh!
     
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    All the photos are really very epic. You have also edited it very well. But I notice that First photos is quite different after You edit it. But I like it dude.
     
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    Denny, I like your pics, all of them. We have similar equipments which is also pretty cool. I especially like #3. The color and composition is just well done here.
     

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