a day at the beach

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by bnkrecords, Aug 21, 2007.

  1. bnkrecords

    bnkrecords TPF Noob!

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    what do yall think?

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    Nice capture, i would crop this one to remove the empty space behind the baby (rule of thirds). Shes so cute with that cheeky smile.
     
  3. bnkrecords

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    ok, how is this crop?

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    Wow I love it, that picture just really brings out a good emotion in me.
     
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    i prefer the original crop.
     
  6. bnkrecords

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    thanks for looking
     
  7. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The crop has a good use of the Rule of Thirds and a nice diagonal line formed by mom’s and the baby’s faces
     
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    I like the crop you did here bnkrecords, i find it a better composed portrait because the viewer is not distracted from your subject. Hope to see more.
     

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