A Day at the Park! C&C PLEASE!

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  1. MarkV1184

    MarkV1184 TPF Noob!

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    Hi guys, this is my first go at photography with my DSLR! Give me ALL the C&C you can think of please! It was a hazy day outside after the rain. Please comment even if you rip me to shreds! I enjoy the criticism and it will only make me better.

    1. 1/6, F10, ISO100
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    2. 1/200, F5.6, ISO100
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    3. 1/800, F5.6, ISO800
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    4. 1/25, F14, ISO200
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    5. 1/60, F5, ISO200
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    6. 1/15, F10, ISO100
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    7. 1/80, F5.6, ISO400
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    Photos were taken with a Nikon D60 and 18-55mm VR lens
     
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  2. J.G. Photography

    J.G. Photography TPF Noob!

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    I love the shoe one! It has nice depth. Nice job! :mrgreen:
     
  3. dxqcanada

    dxqcanada Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    #2 You just need the caterpillar ... get in closer
    #3 Crop for just the water fountain and the flowers.
    #5 I think it needs cropping.
    #1, 5, 6 Not much happening.
    #7 It's OK, but I feel that there is something missing.
     
  4. MarkV1184

    MarkV1184 TPF Noob!

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    More comments please!
     

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