A double First, Portrait and strobism - Critique Please

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  1. SteveEllis

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    Hey Guys,

    I was sitting around reading Photographer monthly and it inspired me to try a portrait. I've been reading the Strobism blog and have just bought two strobes.

    Heres my first shoot, please critique :)

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    Thanks,
    Steve.
     
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    I like the deep black background and the natural gaze of the model.

    The only thing I would have done differently is to crop a little more of the right side background out.
     
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