A few B&W

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  1. immski

    immski TPF Noob!

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    Here are a few B&Ws I took with my new camera (which is so awesome). All of these phots were taken in my church. They aren't the best because I was just fooling around but just wanted to know what you thought. Thanks

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    Thanks for looking, honest critique is appreciated.
     
  2. skiboarder72

    skiboarder72 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    i like 1,4,5 good job with the DOF:thumbup:
     
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    immski TPF Noob!

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  4. Peanuts

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    #4 is spectacular! Use of lines is perfect, and with it in black and white.. wow. My only suggest is to either
    1. Clone out the object in the lower right
    2. Crop out the lowest row to get rid of it.

    Great job on these, each is very unique.
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Four!
    The one taken from the balcony strikes me as the strongest of the series here, although I also see that it is not PERFECTLY symmetrical, which would have helped (and maybe still can be achieved?). And yes, I agree with Peanuts on the flowers (?) at the righthand bottom... they are distracting.

    Nice church!
    Good eye. Interesting. I can tell you are enjoying your new camera.
     

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