a few fall shots

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  1. Maxwell

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    here are a few i took the other day, first attempt at hosting pictures for critique so far
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    old abandoned bridge
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    this one i played around with, sadly its overexposed
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    overexposed again
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    thanks alot brad
     
  2. Ajay

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    I love the colors you got in these and your composition is wonderful, although I think you could crop a little more off of the bottom of #1, maybe up to that one leaf in the bottom center of the image.

    I love the pink and red leaves in #2, but was the water really that dark in person or did that happen in your PP?

    I actually really like #5 even though the sky is blown out...I think it works with the overall mood of the image.
     
  3. Maxwell

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    the water was so dark because there was oil in it, i dident realise that at first until i went up to it.
    im still confused on how itgot so polluted since its in a pretty secluded place.
    thanks for the comments, appreciated
     
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    I like the composition, but for me the color is way too saturated, especially #4. It has reached a point for me where I feel like I am looking at an artistic film, or piece of graphic art, as opposed to a photo.
     
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    Hey Maxwell, these are really nicely composed. All of them.
    OK, the experimental one came out overexposed with the long exposure that was necessary to get the flowing-water-effect, and you probably tried to "fight" the overexposure with upping the saturation, and in the end it has become something more like graphic art than a photo, but I still like the fact that you chose that POV (point of view) and went for that long exposure!

    I think that of these No 2 is my favourite, though I also like the simplicity of the composition in 3 ... and I also like the abandoned bridge, only does that photo look a bit dark...
     
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    Hey great shots, 2 and 4 are my favs, my only comment, is please # your pics next time, it will help us comment on them...lol
     
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    sorry about the numbers i edited them in for you, thanks alot for the comments.
     
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    anything else?
     
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    These are some very fine photos. Number one and two are my favorites for sure. Both seem like they could come right out of Lord of the Rings. Great work.
     
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    i like 3 the best, because of the contrast in colours. (warm and cold)

    in 1, the is a randomn white spot in the water, which is distracting, i think cloning it out would enhance the pic. =)
     

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