A few first photos

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  1. Prashanna

    Prashanna TPF Noob!

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    These are some of my first photos.

    I appreciate any criticism, and I can handle harsh criticism also! Thanks. :)

    If there are too much to comment on, please just point out the weaker ones or stronger ones.

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    Sorry, too many photos for me to do C&C on.
     
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    You've got an interesting eye! Some of those shots I would have never thought of!! LOL!

    My favorites are the railroad tracks b&w and the dogs eyes.

    Nice work!
     
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    Thanks!

    Sorry for putting in so many photos. :p

    Do you mind just pointing out the weaker shots or stronger shots?
     
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    (would help to put numbers on them also)
     
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    Thanks for the suggestion, I added numbers. :)
     
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    The only shot that does anything for me at all is the RR xing #4 I believe. The rest are just snap shots. Nothing really interesting in any of them for me at all.
     
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    I like #1, #4, #6 and #13.

    #2 - Too centered.

    #3 - What's the subject?

    #5 - Too busy.

    #7 - OOF (Out Of Focus) from camera shake.

    #8 - Huh?

    #9 - Not a fan of selective coloring. I like the diagonals.

    #10 - Doesn't do anything for me.

    #11 - What's the subject?

    #12 - Horizon is tilted.

    #13 - Composition is pretty good in this one, but no main subject.

    #14 - Not sure what you're doing with this shot.

    #15 - Seems to have a white balance problem...yellowish tint.

    #16 - Horizon is tilted to the right.
     

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