A few first photos

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  1. E-Van

    E-Van TPF Noob!

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    I just recently started out in photography and thought I would post a few pictures for comments/critique. I'd appreciate any sort of feedback to help me learn some more.

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  2. loser101

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    I like 2 and 3 but if you straighten them it would look better.

    In 4 i think it would help if you had more depth of field....

    The first one doesn't do anything for me sorry..
     
  3. deggimatt

    deggimatt No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    4 and 3 are good... the first one doesnt sound nothing to me and in 5 theres alot of empty space and the bike is a bit out of focus.
    Regards
     
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    Number 4 the bike is too out of focus.
     
  5. Corry

    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    I'd have to say I like 2 the best..agree with the others on 4, with the bike out of focus....

    ...3, I like the tones in it!

    One suggestion across the board on all of the photos...try bumping your contrast up a bit to make your pics 'pop' a bit more. :)

    Not bad...keep posting! Welcome to the forum!
     
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    Number 2 is pretty awesome looks peaceful...
     

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