A Few for C/C Please!

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  1. AdamBomb

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    My Fingers are still numb!

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    i like the color tone of the last one a lot! i like the deserted theme of 1 and 2, and 3's a tough picture to compose but looks like you got it!
     
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    I like them all. The first one's my favourite by far, I think you managed exactly what you were going for there.
    The third's not bad, although I can't shake the feeling tht something is...missing. Maybe it's because with the snow covering the sleepers, the interesting detail is lost. I think it could do with a slight strightening, turning it anti-clockwise.
     
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    Great exposure and focus on all of them. I agree with the last one feeling a bit off. Not sure what it is.
     
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    yes i like them all. i think for the last one i would have you kneeling on the side rather than looking straight back at the camera...
     
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    I think I'd like Four a lot more if you could have gotten your friend more into the shot other than just "kicking back while my bro-friend takes a photograph". At the wheel of the bus making his best "I hit the kegger too many times!" face at the camera would have been awesome.
     
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    or sitting on the bus's steps, and look into the distance or something
     
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    Indeed. If his buddy was a female. I don't see this guy as the "longing gaze" type.
     
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    hahahah very true
     
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    Thanks For the comments Guys.

    Thats me in the last picture, I set the Camera on the back of my Explorer, set the timer and Ran!
     

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