A Few From Yesterday's Shoot For C&C

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  1. MikeBookPro

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    I had a bit of a "mock" photo play date yesterday. Here are a few shots from the day. C&C on all of things I've been having trouble with in previous threads would be appreciated. ;)

    #1
    I like this one. I think it captures the "dirty, tired little girl who is having fun at the park" factor pretty well. ;)
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    #2
    I wish I hadn't tilted the camera. Unfortunately, the composition makes it tough to salvage by rotating it level in Photoshop. I still think it's cute, though.
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    #3
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    Don't worry about #2, it is just amazing !!
     
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    #2 is really awesome! did you use any lights/flash? or was it available light?
     
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    I like #2 the best, though by the direction she's looking, the girl on the left looks distracted and not really caring about the other girl that she's hugging.

    #3 the top of her hands and hair are blown out.

    To me the focus looks a little soft on all 3 of them.
     
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    I have this one, too, but I thought the kiss was cuter. ;) Thoughts?

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    Available light.
     
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    #2 is great.

    i think your watermark or whatever is far too large though, kinda distracting from the photos.
     
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    I like the bottom one better than number 2 cause both sets of eyes are looking at me!!! That one is great!
     
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    Agreed, the second one with the two girls is much better.
     

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