Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by sarahthirteen, May 10, 2010.
Im sorry I dont have the full sized saved on my computer
Grain was intentional in that last three
68 views and no comments....tough crowd here!
I like the last 3.
At least 1/2 the crowd that visits here is not on the same time schedule as you are.
Be a little patient and you may see some posts.
BTW: Welcome to the forum
Thank you those are my favorites
I like the first and the last. A little less shadow on the first where her wrist is. The shadow on the face works, but the wrist shadow distracts me. Otherwise, I love it.
The first photo is a bit too much PP and those big whites of her eyes are stealing my attention away from the rest of the photo. Had she been looking just a bit more toward the camera, this would of been better.
On the second photo, aside from the slight orange peel like texture on the cheeks and eyelids I really like this photo the best.
I am still learning... But I do like your photography.
I would suggest cloning out the pony tail holder on her wrist in the first pic, and like someone already said, a little less shadow on the subject's left eye.
The second looks eh...too much flash on her face and the stray hairs are distracting.
The third, I've never liked seeing a messy face on any child, and this one looks like a snap shot.
I have the same fabric! Mine is blue with the stars and speckles in silver threading. I would have liked to have seen a touch more light on the face. But I think this one and the last have the most potential out of the photos of the toddler.
The last one is my favorite of the toddler. Except the seem in the fabric coming straight out the top of the head. Maybe try cloning that out. I do like the noise in this one.
She always has that hair tie around her wrist its like her "thing" so I wanted to keep it "her" removing it would be like removing her trademark.....
hair was purposely messy it was what she was going for...
I like capturing kids being kids messy faces and all haha.
that is the exact same fabric I only used sunlight coming through a window on a snowy day for the lighting...
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