A few new Tshirt shots.

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  1. RMThompson

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    Just a few I really enjoyed from my last session:

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    these are really nice. the model is "interesting" but that doesn't take away from the shots. good stuff. i also love the poses, just the right amount of candid mixed with posed.
     
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    whats up with the hair....?
     
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    I'm a noob who just comes in here to look at good photos. But since someone else said it I will say it looks like she's wearing a wig.
     
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    i hate bloc fringes lol..
    her hair is pretty distracting (that is why Hair and makeup is important for Fashion Togs)

    the best of these i would say is 3, 6 and 7.. nothing wrong with the images it is model issues tbh... im looking at it from a Consumer point of view, In fashion the model has to be Glamorous to sell the product that is why top clothing companies always use "Nice Looking, Lustful, Seductive Ladies."
    Im not saying this girl is ugly at all... all i am saying is these are the wrong poses for her, #3 flatters this model allot, that would be the selling image in my opinion
    #4 the yawn doesnt work well in this image if she wasn't yawning, this would be fine
    #6 the smile seems a little Forced tbh.
     
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    is that good luck bear in number 3?
     
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    Interesting.

    I LOVE her hair!
     
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    For a second i thought you were trying to give your self a positive critique :p
    Her hair could be nice but is far too plain and for face shape.. it just doesn,t work, makes her head look so much bigger plus i just hate Bloc fringes xP and the fresh cut look
     
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    I'm just a noob, and I usually don't comment on the photos in the pro thread, but in the first image you can see both the model and your camera in the reflection in the window. You might want to try to clone it out or something. Other than that I love the shots!
     
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    A lot of these seem out of focus and over-processed.

    IMO, the best shot is the third one because it wasn't over-processed.
     
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    My first impressions.

    I like pic 1 pov is cool, nice I'm looking at the t-shirt. Pic 4 is good too. Now for the bad, I feel pic 4 has to much contrast in the bg or tonemapping/burn. Pic 6 is cute, but I'm having trouble seeing whats on the t-shirt.
     
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    I have to ask - could someone explain the horse (unicorn?) / whale shirt to me?

    I ain't gettin' it.

    Jon
     

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