A few portraits, c&c please :)

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  1. haleina

    haleina TPF Noob!

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    I'm an amateur, just starting out. But I'm open to all comments and criticism.

    All photo done with natural lighting.

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  2. gopal

    gopal TPF Noob!

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    first is exhilirating...second is a moody ..third is finger portrait and fourth is a thoughtful mood....fine, all with different characteristics.
     
  3. IgsEMT

    IgsEMT No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    for beginner, not bad :)
    #1 is more appealing, all the others are a flat snapshots, no punctuation of the character.
    keep shooting and improving.
     
  4. MrRamonG

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    I really like the expressions you captured on these shots, and the colors are nice. The crooked street in the third one is a little distracting and all of them are tad bit too dark for me.
     
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    I like the 4th one best, just her expression, like she's having a good little snicker to herself, but I agree with MrRamonG, they all seem a bit dark for my liking.
     
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    Beautiful
     
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    The first is a nice picture but a bit underexposed.
    The fourth is a lot underexposed.

    (you might get more complete responses if you allowed your pictures to be edited)

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