A few recent shots - C&C

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  1. Brutus

    Brutus TPF Noob!

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    I recently got my last four rolls of film developed, and from these I got about 20 decent pictures. These aren't necessarily the best, but I can't post 'em all and I can never decide, so I just chose 5:

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    These were all shot with my AE-1 Program, on Kodak Gold ASA200.
     
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    i like #3 :thumbup:
     
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    Ah! Forgot to number them, sorry
     
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    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

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    I like 4!
     
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    One and three really caught my attention, I like them a lot.
     
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    I like 5.
     
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    I like 3 and 4. :)
     
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    Good shots. I like #3 too. I think it would be nicer without the piece of the right knee, shoe and the long sleeve rolled up.
     
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    number 4 is my fav. the rocks w the red shoes go well.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Let me be the oddball who likes No. 2 best of all you're showing us here :D.

    I love the play of light and shadows, and I really like photos that were taken at building sites or something similar to that.
     
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    Haha, thank goodness! I like that one too, at least I know I'm not crazy now :D
     
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    KenC Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I agree #2 is interesting. I would accentuate the diagonal shadow by cropping on the right almost to that vertical seam in the wall and on the left past the first row of holes. You might also consider trying this in bw - the color may be more of a distraction from shape and composition than anything else.
     

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