a few shots c &c

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by jtedesco, Aug 14, 2009.

  1. jtedesco

    jtedesco TPF Noob!

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    1. self portrait[​IMG]
    2. grandma[​IMG]
    3.grandpa[​IMG]
     
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    #1 could use a fill flash or bounced from the model's right
    #2 could use a better composition
    #3 you clipped his butt.

    overall the pictures aren't doing much for me. they look like just snapshots.
    for portraits you may want to use shallow DOF to make the subject pop
     
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    try telling a story with your photos ... these are kind of bland
     
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    well the thing is, im just starting photography, ive onl had my camera for about a month and i only have that, no extra flashes or anything, ive only been using natural light. secondly, i dont like making people pose for photos, i like capturing everyday life, its just more genuine and interesting to me
     

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