a few shots from the past week

[notelliot]

i'd like to make more time to shoot with film. these are a few from a roll of kodak 400cn. i'd apprieciate a little feedback.

i particularly liked this one:
1

2

3

4 - these last ones are multiple exposures

5

6 - wish i had left the shutter open longer or exposed it a couple more times

 

[D3sh1]

wow dude i realy liked all of those !!! ,
shooting with film is the best and aspecialy if you can hold your shutter open for some time :O

 

[misa.j]

Wow, cool shots! I love all of them, but especially #4!

Double exposures look incredible in that shot!

 

[Alex_B]

I like the first one in a way ... in particular the upper part is very nice and exposure really works here.

But then #2 has something. I like it being not tack sharp and blown out in parts. A very nice image!

 

[Skyhawk]

Good stuff. I especially liked the tones you got on #3 and #5. I also liked the subtley in those two shots.

Jeff

 

[Bobby Ironsights]

#1 quite good.

That space outside the foodcourt is always so active and cheerful, but the shot brings some grittiness.


I agree with your appraisal of #6

I think you should use a smaller aperture, on whatever you've got.

Primes often go down to only 22, but a kit zoom can be good (for this at least), and go down to f32.

Also, you could try, in this shot, a differentiating mask.

Put some onionskin, or translucent plastic, with the textured surface up on the negative,

Then use a small mechanical pencil to shade in that area (like the overexposed building.

Then put into the enlarger negative carrier very carefully so it stays aligned. It's tricky but beats using a piece of cardboard with a hole in it, under the lens.

 

[notelliot]

although i did develop these myself, i didn't do it in a darkroom. c-41 process machine care of black's/fuji. thanks for the comments everybody!

.. and it was a nikon f80 and 50/1.8, 17-35/2.8