A kid of Jaisalmer (Rajasthan, India)

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Arun Gaur, Dec 6, 2009.

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Is my composition fine?

  1. Very Fine

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  2. Very Poor

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  3. Just OK

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  4. Don't know.

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  1. Arun Gaur

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    A poll was perhaps not the best way to go on this one, as the options available to the voter are too narrow.

    I'm no expert by a longshot, but my 'Joe Public' views are: I like the side view and that he's not looking at the camera, I like the splash of colour that the balloon provides, but I find the image a bit dark, and because the child in the bright shirt in the background is still fairly 'visible' (ie not more blurred), it's a bit distracting from the main subject of your image. Just my two cents worth!

    And hey, welcome to the forum, and I look forward to seeing more of your posts!
     
  3. Arun Gaur

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    Thanks Antarctican for welcoming me.
    Your comments are valuable. If you think that polling is not appropriate in this case, how can I discontinue it?
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    There's no need to discontinue the poll, I was just suggesting that asking for actual comments (as opposed to someone ticking off a box with the wording you chose) might have been a preferable way of getting feedback.
     
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    Welcome to TPF! the kid looks bored though
     
  7. Arun Gaur

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    Thanks for welcoming me, though I would not agree with the idea of bored looks. Some of the part of the expression may pertain to it. However, there is much more than that. For example I find a hint also of an the air of abstraction. Now what is the relation between the the air of abstraction and that of the boredom would be quite interesting to explore.
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