A lil C&C pwease :)

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  1. OffTheWall

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    So i thought i would take some shots with my best friends inside of a blue broken toyota outside my house and would like some c&c :) let me know what you all think.

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    Not feeling the ones in the car too much.

    The last one is better but shadows a bit too harsh with the shot. I'd soften and while PPing, watch not to overexpose when adding effects.
     
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    Interesting idea, but not doing much for me. The last two seem rather over-exposed.
     
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    I'm not a fan of the processing done on them. The shots in the truck, while I can see what you were trying to do (maybe? good looking female covered in grime?), she's a cute girl, I think you are on the right track with the last one.
     
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    LOL yeah these were all test shots for a technique i found online. i'll post the "decent ones" in a sec :) i like the ones in the truck kinda HDR looking sorta kinda lol.
     
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    Here are the ones that i will give to her :)

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    6 don't know if i like the pose or not.
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    4 and 6 are good in my opinion.
     
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    In that last set you have, #6 is a keeper though I'd crop it a bit tighter on the right hand side. Looks good in B&W
     
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    #2 is no picture the world should see...lol (dirty mind) :fangs: She had a good grip!!
    #6 is nice [​IMG]

    Keep shooting!!!
     
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    LOL I didn't even notice that hahaha! Oh gawd :lmao::lmao:
     
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    lol that wouldn't be the shot I would want out there...lol
     
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    In the PP it looks like someone beat her entire body with a baseball bat and her bruises are getting to that ugly stage. I much prefer the originals.
     

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