A little coffee....

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    That is a beautiful photograph. I love everything about it, the darkness, the composition, the subject. Really impressive.
     
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    Thanks mad_malteaser! I appreciate your feedback. I was a bit bored last night when I decided to do this one. I like how it came out (I think)

    Anyone else? You can rip it apart if you want. I can handle it. Just let me know your critique.

    Take care- Jared
     
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    Well..I'll add my own comments after looking at it a bit longer.

    I think the highlights are blown at the top where the steam is coming out. I could add a bit more noise as well.

    YEs?
     
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    Hey I am a betterphoto member as well!! Great shot love how black the blacks are!!
     
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    Thanks very much! I appreciate it. What is your gallery name? I'll check it out and comment. Let me know and thanks!
     
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    Its been awhile...but I just checked out your site...You've got some really nice photos on there. Did you use a lightbox for some of the macro type shots? I'm working on one of those right now.

    Nice site! and thanks!
     
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    wow man, thats awesome. i had an idea like that but it went all to hell. good job!
     
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    excellent capture! would love to see more of your work!
     
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    Jared that is a wonderful shot... You should have taken it earlier so you'd have been able to submit it to the "Kitchen" challenge :)
     
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    That's really great. I could seriously see it hanging in a swanky cafe.
     

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