A little coffee....

crystalview · Sep 28, 2004

Let me know what can be improved. I have a couple different versions, this is one.

Sorry about not embedding the photo. I will get to that soon. -Jared

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http://www.betterphoto.com/gallery/...9878&catID=&style=&rowNumber=1&memberID=42602

mad_malteaser · Sep 28, 2004

That is a beautiful photograph. I love everything about it, the darkness, the composition, the subject. Really impressive.

crystalview · Sep 28, 2004

Thanks mad_malteaser! I appreciate your feedback. I was a bit bored last night when I decided to do this one. I like how it came out (I think)

Anyone else? You can rip it apart if you want. I can handle it. Just let me know your critique.

Take care- Jared

crystalview · Sep 28, 2004

Well..I'll add my own comments after looking at it a bit longer.

I think the highlights are blown at the top where the steam is coming out. I could add a bit more noise as well.

YEs?

Alyssajns24 · Sep 28, 2004

Hey I am a betterphoto member as well!! Great shot love how black the blacks are!!

crystalview · Sep 28, 2004

Thanks very much! I appreciate it. What is your gallery name? I'll check it out and comment. Let me know and thanks!

Alyssajns24 · Sep 28, 2004

I dont have a gallery there...I do have my own website though

http://www.flutterbystudios.org

Thanks,
Alyssa

crystalview · Nov 10, 2004

Its been awhile...but I just checked out your site...You've got some really nice photos on there. Did you use a lightbox for some of the macro type shots? I'm working on one of those right now.

Nice site! and thanks!

Uselessdreamer1 · Nov 10, 2004

wow man, thats awesome. i had an idea like that but it went all to hell. good job!

JonMikal · Nov 10, 2004

excellent capture! would love to see more of your work!

mentos_007 · Nov 10, 2004

Jared that is a wonderful shot... You should have taken it earlier so you'd have been able to submit it to the "Kitchen" challenge

triggerhappy · Nov 10, 2004

That's really great. I could seriously see it hanging in a swanky cafe.

mygrain · Nov 10, 2004

triggerhappy said:
That's really great. I could seriously see it hanging in a swanky cafe.

Yep just what i was thinking....slap a fat black OR white border around it and print it as posters...

crystalview · Nov 10, 2004

Hey, thanks for the comments and praise everyone! I thought this post was dead a couple weeks ago, I'm glad it was revived and commented on again! Thanks alot! -Jared