A little something for the kitchen

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  1. deryckramey

    deryckramey TPF Noob!

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    So I am moving into my first place in a few weeks and realized I need something to deck the walls. This grew great interest in my to do my own creations.

    I am in no means a professional artist but aspire to learn as much about photography as this young mind can. Here are two photos I just took today. I am very simplistic in nature but modern as well.

    Any critiquing would be a great learning lesson for me and very much appriciated.

    Photos were taken with a Sony Cybershot DSC-P72. (I only have one other camera as I've not been able to afford nice ones yet. But I've not learned how to use it properly.)


    Here are the photos... titled Green Pepper Number 1 and Green Pepper with Hand


    http://php.indiana.edu/~djramey/images/photos/photofolio/GPN1.jpg

    http://php.indiana.edu/~djramey/images/photos/photofolio/GPN2.jpg


    thank you for your time!!

    It is much appreciated!

    Deryck
     
  2. MDowdey

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    hi there and welcome!!

    the first one is a great kitchen piece!! you should try bumping the contrast a little!!! but its a great shot!!

    i cant see the second one...i get a red x


    welcome to the forums


    md
     
  3. deryckramey

    deryckramey TPF Noob!

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    Ok thank you... I don't know why the second one doesn't show up, it shows up here... but computers are computers.


    I worked on the contrast a little bit... I think its a bit better but I'm the new one here.

    :p
     
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    I like the first. Nice work - tho I might crop the edges a bit. I don't dig on the second but I can't honestly criticize it - it's a personal opinion thing I reckon - I don't like the hand being there.
     

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