A pic of my Girlfriend and sister

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  1. Dcrymes84

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    Hey guys and gals i just wanted to share a few pictures i took with ya'll this past weekend. Im just now finding out about this site online. So please forgive me. Well here we go

    A picture of my girlfriend
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    And a few pictures of my 8 year old sister Madison at her pageant at North Greenville college in Greenville south carolina

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    Hi neighbor! (from charleston)

    Nice shots...

    I'm not a professional but my opinion is....

    1. I wish her eyes weren't so dark

    2. The shadow on the left of her face is distracting.

    2/3. needs more light on the face.

    Over all they look good though, and few more simple adjustments and they could be really good.
     
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    The first shot looks like it was lit with a flash straight on, that takes out a bit of the natural contrast.

    The second two are very nicely shot.

    BTW, welcome to the forum.
     
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    Thanks guys for the comments.
     
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    i agree with dizzy ( also from charleston ). # 2 could be better with a fill light on her faces, #1 i dont like the lighting , # 3 possing is a little bit stressfull for her
     

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