A Poem What I Wrote

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  1. Marctwo

    Marctwo TPF Noob!

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    Some of you may have visited the 'poetry thread'. Well it kind of got me in the mood so I ended up looking through some old stuff. I found this.

    It's a merry little number that I thought may cheer you up. :Joker:

    "The Life and Death of a Hero"

    One long and desperate gaze
    It's written on your face.
    reflections of a dying soul with loyalty misplaced.
    A vow to make amends
    Another conscience cleansed
    To compensate revenge of men who died for thier mistakes.


    A time to live and die
    Betrays a fearful eye
    Open to the world and ever reaching for the sky.
    Behind a lost disguise,
    Forbidden pride applies.
    Ambitious in the end, forever waiting to arise.


    Relief, at last, for all
    As all the Heroes fall.
    Standing tall to pledge allegiance to the Berlin Wall.


    I was a happy little soul in those days. :lol:
     
  2. Rob

    Rob TPF Noob!

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    Wot no toads?

    Seriously though *poetry appreciation vibes*
     
  3. Marctwo

    Marctwo TPF Noob!

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    lol. I don't think I ever covered that subject - until I found TPF. I guess I'm a more fully rounded artist now, though. :lol:

    Cheers Rob.
     

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