Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Jeremy Z, Jan 14, 2007.
I like sepia over B&W for portraits. I don't see it a lot here; any particular reasons?
... and here is one of my lovely wife:
Last, but not least, my sister:
If it weren't for the blown out area in your grandma's photo, I'd love it. But here I find that uneven side light a bit distracting.
Your wife is very pretty and I like the use of fill-flash here.
Her hair, however, looks a bit oversharpened - is that possible?
Do I see some family resemblance in your sister's photo? I think I do.
The hat gives her face some nicely even light.
I Like them, thank you for shareing.
I like the uneven sidelighting, but I didn't even notice that the left side of her face was blown out. Thanks for the critique!
I didn't use fill flash. The porch we were on was all painted white, so I think that is why there aren't many shadows. I did not sharpen this one at all. I think her hair just looks like that because it was resized down so much, and because the sunlight was backlighting her hair and making it very bright.
Here is a crop of the full size image of her hair, for reference:
How cool is that: a house with an "in-built" reflector!!! ENVY!
Well, now that I am seeing an uncropped version of the backlit hair, I believe that it must be the compression which makes it look so extremely sharp. Thanks for showing me. That does clear it up all right!
Perhaps just personal taste. I like sepia too, but prefer b&w. One of my reasons is because in digital, applying sepia covers up a lot of trouble. Good b&w is harder (for me), because it has to be neutral and that can be tricky in digital.
Having said that, I really like your photo #1. It doesn't bother me that it's too hot on one side. For this kind of emotonal shot, it works, I think. Again, personal taste, but I think it would be improved by being off centered.
The shot of your beautiful wife is not as good, I think. Again, it's too centered for me. The hair and top of chair is too hot, and a little more brightness, whether fill flash or reflected light, would help around the eyes. Finally, the background is distracting because it's too much in focus. (She is beautiful with a great smile). Forgive me if I'm being too critical. I'm still learning how to critique, and I hope you'll post more.
I say all this with respect and hope you know that this is just my personal taste. And I thank you for sharing these.
Sepia, IMO, only works for certain people strangely. I think it works pretty good for your subjects, really. Id like to see a B&W version of your grandmother, just for kicks if youve got one. A little brightness adjustment and adjustment of contrast would clean up the right side of the photo. Nice shots!
Not at all. I/we post images here because we're proud of them, because we want critique, or both. Showing them to other people with a good eye for composition & lighting can help me see a more complete picture. It isn't a competition for me. I love the shots, and they are fully worth printing and framing; they don't have to be "perfect" for that. Can they be better? Always. I'm only 30, so I probably have another 40 good years of photography left in me. Maybe a bit more with anti-shake technology always improving, hehehe.
Understood, and I appreciate your constructive criticism. The only thing I would have a problem with is if someone said they didn't like it, but wouldn't elaborate on why not.
Your wish is my command. *poof*
Here's a B&W version; the left side of her face looks even more blown out, but you can see why. The other side of her faces is too dark to make a correction to the whole scene.
Here's the original version, which doesn't look as blown out, but is also not quite as striking, to me at least:
Here's another shot, with her off-center, and with her more typical smile. This one's the original:
Here's the B&W (a bit too contrasty)
...and here's the sepia:
I like the sepia better on this one as well.
I think maybe you don't see as much sepia on here because it tends to be looked a little down upon I think. It is true that many people who aren't serious about photography simply convert their images to sepia as a crutch to better their photos.
I on the other hand tend to use sepia more often than some. Here I'm not sure it workds for me, it's a little too pinky of a brown, something with a little more black in it might work better. I do prefer the black and white.
And there is nothing wrong with high contrast....
I really like the photos in sepia as well - I think the one with your grandmother works in particular.
I'm just learning so bear with me please =) : but do you adjust the photo into sepia on your computer?
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