A shed

LaFoto · Jan 1, 2005

Mark this in your calendars: I am sending a photo for Critique (shiver-shiver). Well.... have a look, at least, will you?

Now that I can see it up here I can tell that it has suffered heaps in the scanning process. But this is who it came as the print - and how it is after the scanning

P Bailey · Jan 1, 2005

I like this subject matter. It looks a little bright but that could be my monitor. Overall nice shot.

LaFoto · Jan 1, 2005

I'm afraid it even looks too bright on my bad and usually very dark monitor. The print is not as bad. I might have to do some changes to the scanned picture...

2Stupid2Duck · Jan 1, 2005

Now that you scanned it, can you tilt it slightly to the clockwise mate? and drop the levels a smidge (just a smidge or you'll lose the detail in the fore-ground).

LaFoto · Jan 2, 2005

(I'm afraid I haven't got a clue about those "levels" you always talk about

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Uselessdreamer1 · Jan 2, 2005

i think it looks a little bright. but i really like it!

deryckramey · Jan 2, 2005

I enjoy the barn the most out of this whole photograph.

If I could change anything (and I can't its your work and you should appreciate it the most) the leaves seem a bit... hmm how should I say. Complex.

I know the photo is representing the scene beautifully, but the simplistic nature of shed's and barns as a whole and in particular this case seem to be over shadowed by the crazyness of all the leaves.

Obvioulsy thats just my impression. I'd crop a bit from the top, but all else in the photo is brilliant!

Job well done mate.

LaFoto · Jan 2, 2005

OK, two new versions:
rectified and a little adjusted (well enough?):

And cropped (for Deryck):

Any better?

deryckramey · Jan 2, 2005

Ok strike that, I now really like the original.

I do really like the barn... it catches my eye everytime.

Brilliant work La

LaFoto · Jan 2, 2005

Could you SEE it, while I was still busy editing out the bmp-versions replacing them by jpg-versions? For I couldn't, which brought me into an editing-frenzy! :shock: