A shed

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  1. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Mark this in your calendars: I am sending a photo for Critique (shiver-shiver). Well.... have a look, at least, will you?

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    Now that I can see it up here I can tell that it has suffered heaps in the scanning process. But this is who it came as the print - and how it is after the scanning :(
     
  2. P Bailey

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    I like this subject matter. It looks a little bright but that could be my monitor. Overall nice shot.
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I'm afraid it even looks too bright on my bad and usually very dark monitor. The print is not as bad. I might have to do some changes to the scanned picture...
     
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    Now that you scanned it, can you tilt it slightly to the clockwise mate? and drop the levels a smidge (just a smidge or you'll lose the detail in the fore-ground).
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    (I'm afraid I haven't got a clue about those "levels" you always talk about :oops: :oops: :oops: )
     
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    i think it looks a little bright. but i really like it!
     
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    I enjoy the barn the most out of this whole photograph.

    If I could change anything (and I can't its your work and you should appreciate it the most) the leaves seem a bit... hmm how should I say. Complex.

    I know the photo is representing the scene beautifully, but the simplistic nature of shed's and barns as a whole and in particular this case seem to be over shadowed by the crazyness of all the leaves.

    Obvioulsy thats just my impression. I'd crop a bit from the top, but all else in the photo is brilliant!

    Job well done mate.
     
  8. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    OK, two new versions:
    rectified and a little adjusted (well enough?):

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    And cropped (for Deryck):

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    Any better?
     
  9. deryckramey

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    Ok strike that, I now really like the original.

    I do really like the barn... it catches my eye everytime.

    Brilliant work La
     
  10. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Could you SEE it, while I was still busy editing out the bmp-versions replacing them by jpg-versions? For I couldn't, which brought me into an editing-frenzy! :shock:
     
  11. deryckramey

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    Yep just fine

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    Nope - the top one of the two edits rulez. I love it. Nice work mate.

    *does a victory dance for Laphoto but wobbles out of control.
     

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