A shot I took tonight

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  1. rob91

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  2. dangerwoman

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    well, it just looks like a snapshot to me, except its a longer exposure. what is it that you like about the photo?
     
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    Your style is slowing growing on me, but this one is a little lackluster compared to your others in my opinion. There is a clearly defined subject, but like a poster above said, it looks snap-shotty. There's nothing to really make you wonder what's going on. In my opinion, that's what seperates your mediocre photos from your better ones (Pictue of a Guy, Moving Away). My favorites of yours make me think.
     
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    I do agree. This shot is perfect, but a touch underexposed. Perhaps a simple B+W conversion in Photoshop can fix this. I'd love to purchase this as a print!
     
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    This is your first shot on here i don't completely hate, the framing is bad and the over all thing could use some work. But at least I don't hate it.
     
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    i hadnt seen the other posts of his before i posted this.
    oops.
     
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    Personally, I think it needs to be out of focus. The color gradations being lost in bokeh could be beautiful.


    I'm dead serious.
     
  9. rob91

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    If you're serious I can arrange that.
     
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    A little too dark IMO
     
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    As serious as a heart attack!
     
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    I would of liked it better if it was strongly out of focus...
     

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