a sunset walk (first attempt)

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by joyride, Apr 25, 2006.

  1. joyride

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    I think this could be worked a little more, but I dont really know how. Should I have left the entire lighthouse in? Or does it just not work? I had to edit out about 6 people, but I think it works better without them.
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    I think compositionally it's a bit heavy on the left hand side, but the lines draw your eye to the right so I think it still works. I wonder if it would look a bit better if you brightened it a bit?
    Very pretty sunset:thumbup:
     

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