a telephone.

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  1. televators

    televators TPF Noob!

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    that's a picture of a telephone, yeah. one of my favorite pictures ever. had to resize and down quality a lil bit for photobucket. but yeah.

    don't be TOO mean.. :D
     
  2. ShootingYou

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    This needs cropping. Severely. Also, try it in b/w.
     
  3. bogleric

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    a little interesting, but not much else. As for the cropping, that might help, but where to start.

    Overall the picture doesn't portray a story. Something is missing.
     
  4. Osmer_Toby

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    wow. gotta disagree some. this shot is way cool, to my eye. the composition is incredible. the phone is dead center, yet sure does not look it because of all the converging lines.

    it's an optical illusion.

    extremely well done.
     

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