Abe Picks

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  1. craig

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    This is 4 of 8 the Abe chose from our shoot. Let me know what you think.

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    I think they look good. Now to the retouching yaaaaaay!
     
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    Number one's pose is a little awkward, and the shadows in number 4 are too harsh. But those are minor, I think they are great shots :) Some retouching on number 2 would really make it pop!
     
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    Great choices. :) I also looked at the contact sheet, and you had wonderful stuff there.
     
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    My only crits would be in #1 and #3, the fingers are cut off.

    Also, in #2, its blown out on the sides of the face, and it appears to have too much light spill, as it's hazy on one side. A large cutter placed in between the subject and the background light would fix the light spill issue.

    Otherwise, I generally like the focus, color, and sharpness.
     
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    Thanks for looking gang!!!!!!

    Love & Bass
     
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    I kind of get a Bob Dylan vibe from the last one.

    So, that's probably my fav...
     
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    Thank you!

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    good photos overall. need to do some touchup work.

    and not to be cruel...but I think you need to work on your directing skills cuz these poses are pretty cheezy in my humble opinion. too forced. unnatural. but then again, some people are really hard to direct so maybe that was a factor, even so...a good director should be able to pull good poses out of anyone. some got it, some dont.
     
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    Thanks for your opinion. Truth be known I am an amazing director and we are all very proud of these poses.

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