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  1. Scarlett_Phoenix

    Scarlett_Phoenix TPF Noob!

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    I thought I would post this here and see what you guys think.My first Abstract piece (I am having loads of firsts this week :) )

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    And incase anyone wonders what it is......................well, I will let you guess a bit first. ;)
     
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    :boogie: *Bump* :boogie:
     
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    Very cool :D ... think it's the fruit-peel-grating bit of a grater or the spiky bit of a steak tenderiser. Reasonable guesses?
     
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    The chrome step to a truck of some-sort?

    It looks a little flat, try adding a smidge of contrast to bolden it up. :)
     
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    :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Yay, you guessed correctly. it is indeed a steak tenderiser. :thumbup:
     
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    Is this any better? Or not enough?


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    Yes, definately looks better.

    For me, I try to add as much as I can until it's too much, then add a little more. :lol: No, I kid, I back off a little. Under the assumption, it's hard to add too much.

    Regardless the new version definately looks good.
     
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    Thank you, it helps to get the views of others, expecially if it help bring on improvments. :thumbup: :D
     
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    I said it on DA but I'll say it here too...this is a great first! Wonderful shot Kim.
     
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    I thought I would post it in both places..........you can never get too much feedback. :D
     
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    Darn tootin'!
     

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