ad for my photography

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by DeepSpring, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,451
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Los Angeles
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    please tell me what you think of it. if i should move anything around change the text. thank you [​IMG]
     
  2. nitefly

    nitefly TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2006
    Messages:
    988
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Birmingham, UK
    I like it apart from the text. I just don't like the font or the colour.
     
  3. ShootHoops

    ShootHoops TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 23, 2006
    Messages:
    2,923
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    New Orleans, LA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I agree with Nath's comment about the text.

    By not putting a period or anything after the "You name it" part, it sort of makes it look like it's saying that Deep Spring Photography is apart of the types of things you do (if that makes any sense). Maybe you could change the font of just that part of the text?

    On the other hand, great pics. I love the one on the bottom left. Keep up the good work!
     
  4. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,451
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Los Angeles
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    ahhh period yes that makes much sense. I'll add that and change the text if i can find something i like online. But for sure ill make the deep spring a different font. thanks guys
     
  5. TBaraki

    TBaraki TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 17, 2005
    Messages:
    718
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Edmonton, Canada
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I like your images and layout alot. The text/font has to go though. You have to look 'past' it to see the images which are what you are trying to sell.

    Simple is best for product such as this. I'd avoid bright colours and wacky fonts.

    You photos look really nice. I'm sure your customers will be very happy with their results.
     
  6. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,451
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Los Angeles
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    as for as the wording of it tho can do you think that can stay?
     
  7. Hfry

    Hfry TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 19, 2006
    Messages:
    195
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Loose that Font! LOOKS CHEAP AND UNATTRACTIVE.... But i guess Its your style. (NOt trying to be rude, or Down on your style, but you could do better) But The Appeal Isnt there... Keep the dark back Ground. but Change the Text and Maybe play with the Color. A++ on the Pictures. Nice work. Good luck.
     
  8. CHRISTIAN2170

    CHRISTIAN2170 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 21, 2005
    Messages:
    145
    Likes Received:
    0
    for been honest... I dont like the font and the color
     
  9. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,451
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Los Angeles
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    [​IMG]I just noticed i didnt capitalize the "i" in it ill change that later
     
  10. ShootHoops

    ShootHoops TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 23, 2006
    Messages:
    2,923
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    New Orleans, LA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I like the new one :D
     
  11. srobb

    srobb TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 16, 2006
    Messages:
    53
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Mt. Sterling, Ky
    Well, I would have agreed with losing the font and the color on the original. I think the new one is much, much better. It does not distract from the ad as a whole and gives a very professional touch to it. Very good work on the pics. I just love the lower left with the rose.
     
  12. Hfry

    Hfry TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 19, 2006
    Messages:
    195
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Looks alot better... I would Honestly Play with A couple other fonts and Post the Different OPt. on here and take a poll.. Good luck. Looks a Shizz Load nicer. Props.
     

Share This Page