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  1. tahmail

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    Ideas on composition or lighting? Thanks in advance.
     
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    i like it, but its a bit too bright,
     
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    Is this better?

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    Pretty good. Yes the second attaempt is better.
    Composition is good as is DOF.
    Possibly a little too much foreground, this will take the horizon away from the centre
     
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    Looks a bit red to me. The slight tilt is kind of buggy too.

    Pretty place.
     
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    I'll try one more. Tell me, 1,2 or 3.

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    here i edited it for you, at least it suits my tastes, hope you dont mind

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    You need to adjust the curves, here, a few tries...

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    What do you mean by "Adjust he curves" Nomad?
     
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    I prefer the 3rd one myself. Perhaps just because I like having more of the mountains in the shot.
     
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    Time of day has affected the lighting. As you see, that can be addressed if it is important to you. Personally, I would like for you to have pulled back a little. The panorama seems crowded on both sides.

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