Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by tahmail, Jun 22, 2007.
Ideas on composition or lighting? Thanks in advance.
i like it, but its a bit too bright,
Is this better?
Pretty good. Yes the second attaempt is better.
Composition is good as is DOF.
Possibly a little too much foreground, this will take the horizon away from the centre
Looks a bit red to me. The slight tilt is kind of buggy too.
I'll try one more. Tell me, 1,2 or 3.
here i edited it for you, at least it suits my tastes, hope you dont mind
You need to adjust the curves, here, a few tries...
What do you mean by "Adjust he curves" Nomad?
If you are using photoshop press Ctrl + M, here's a link that would explain it better...
Did you like any of those 3 edits??
I prefer the 3rd one myself. Perhaps just because I like having more of the mountains in the shot.
Time of day has affected the lighting. As you see, that can be addressed if it is important to you. Personally, I would like for you to have pulled back a little. The panorama seems crowded on both sides.
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