After a day of shoveling at our skatepark...

Discussion in 'Photojournalism & Sports Gallery' started by SamSt, Apr 6, 2008.

  1. SamSt

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    I think these definately would have benefitted from you being closer. As it is, it's hard to concentrate on the subject, he kind of get lost, and you've got a ton of wasted space.

    Technically, they look pretty good. The composition is what I would look to improve on.
     
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    I agree. The pictures are neat and the idea is there but I think both of these images would be stronger if you were closer.
     
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    thanks! I'll reshoot sometime soon!
     
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    yep, definitely get closer.
     

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