after a rainy night

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    Ok, I was suggested to put it ere and I need a serious critique :)

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    I think it's too saturated. The photo is too green and yellow.
     
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    i do like it, i like the rain.
    The colours look fine to me considering it is a plant.
     
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    Like the intense colors and how the colors fade to black in the background. I always like water and plants/flowers toghether.

    The leaf in the center screams to be the subject, the lightest and brightest. The linear arrangement of the water droplets also help drive that leaf as the subject. Maybe cropping to put that leaf on the lower right 1/3 intersection would help.
     

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